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Move lineartby *Kanza

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Working on movement, guess I should try adding action lines and work on dynamic composition *sigh*
I wanted to render movement only with a clean lineart. I first drew her naked, then I covered her with some fabric (I didn't want her to be censored).

It didn't come out that bad, but I still don't really like it because... I'll gradually try to do simpler poses and it'll be harder and harder to make them dynamic ! So I hoped this one would give me confidence for the rest but it didn't !
I won't give up ° < °

Critiques highly welcomed.

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=gendosplace Sep 20, 2010 Student Interface Designer

Just put some colors on these amazing lines... Hope you like it...

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~buljap Feb 2, 2010

Wow, good move. She likes come to kill me. I like this work!

~emilybis8 Dec 16, 2009

The flowing motion of the hair is just, right not to overdone and not to simple. Like goldilocks.

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~Mobicca Aug 23, 2009 Student Interface Designer

The anatomy in movement and perspective is really cool.

I wish I could draw like that. o.O

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*Kanza Aug 28, 2009

I'm glad you like it ! I'm working on movement and am slightly improving... but I still can't integrate my moving character in a background @_@;; (Well, it's kinda logical since my perspective/background skills are bad....)

I'm sure you can do it at your current level !

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~krassawat-makul Aug 17, 2009

the perspective is look actionism. i love action comic. that is beautiful.
thank for dev.

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~soumakyo Aug 17, 2009

le seul point génant que je vois c'est sa main sur le devant. Même en tenant compte du raccourci, on a l'impression que son bras est tout petit.

Maintenant, comment améliorer ça, hum, c'est plus difficile à dire ^^. Peut-etre en grossissant sa main. C'est moins réaliste, mais ça donne une impression de relief. Ou alors en grossisant encore le trait.

Bref je pense qu'il ne faut pas hésiter à exagérer.

*Lupilstinskin Aug 16, 2009

great movement effect!

*koyamori Aug 15, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

The dynamic angle is amazing.
I really can't find anything to critic about this.
She looks like she's about to leap off the screen and cut someone:'D

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~dandy-red Aug 15, 2009

Wow, that's one awesome angle! *.* Amazing that you pulled that off so well! I also find her expression really cool~~ Great job

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