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Forgot to request critique ! ;_; Corrected now.
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One of my OC, I had an hard time building the atmosphere / choosing the colors.

Thanks to...
• Alex, a friend of mine, who helped me to choose the colors because I suck at coloring with dull/sad colors.
:iconashasylum: , he was the one who chose to resize the picture and put birds in the background. Look at his awesome coloring : [link]
• Scaredsim from CFSL (cafesale, a french forum) because I was helped by his coloring -which is also awesome- [link]

Tools : Paint Tool SAI (lineart + colors) & Photoshop CS 3.0 (lightnings, colors, background, retouches)

Time : ~1 Sketch+Lineart , ~6h coloring.

LINEART : [link]

Critiques


:iconppgrainbow:
She looks out really beautiful and innocent. I especially love the way how you drew her beautiful white dress and her hair floating around in the wind. Her anatomical proportions look so outstanding. Her facial features came out really good too.

As for the background, I especially love the way how you did the birds flying in the sky as well as the clouds surrounding it. The colouring, shading and lighting surrounding her came out wonderful as always. In all, this is one great illustration that you did and you have worked so hard on it.

Your gallery is incredibly awesome, because of the way how you put a lot of hard work on it over the years! Keep it up! :hug::heart:
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:iconhel-su:
J'aime bien le Overall du dessin, mais y'a quelques petites erreurs qui me bug un peu ;)

La plus grosse serait l'écart entre les yeux. Un être humain normal a généralement l'espace d'un oeil entre les 2.
La tete me parrait legerement grosse.

J'aime beaucoup le fond toutefois, et je remarque que mine de rien, il est plus poussé que le personnage lui même, c'est dommage. Si je voulais pousser la chose plus loin, l'ambiance de la scene en général est repercutée sur la robe, mais pas sur la peau du personnage;)

Bref, un bon taff, j'aime beaucoup (comme d'hab quoi)
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:iconshinjikoda:
so beautyful work :aww:

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:iconashasylum:
wonderful,great work !
:iconkyari-chan:
Really nice! The colors and lighting are great!
:icongreentomatoes:
beautiful!1

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:iconayusand:
great job, I love the colors:love:

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:iconleo-2:
great color:) soon i'll also color it
:iconbit-sinna:
Wonderful colouring. The background is really lovely. :)

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:iconusualuniqueness:
Okay, this picture just blew my mind. I just can't believe how beautiful the coloring is. I bow to your coloring skills. :D
:iconkanza:
Thanks !
(You have an awesome gallery ! I really love "Karitza" and "Hot seat")

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